First sim: Phoenix Wright ReMix

dooey100 · 12-2-2007, 11:26 PM

Hi guys, My first simfile, http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=21817

How is it?

dooey100 · 12-5-2007, 12:20 AM

200 credits to the first 3 people who review my sim!

review doesn't have to be long, but has to be more than a rating out of 10.

ducky285 · 12-5-2007, 01:11 AM

Save your credits, I don't need them, but here's my review.

This obviously isn't a pad file because of the 32nds during the long freezes so I'm judging it as a keyboard file. If it IS supposed to be for pad, you might want to learn how to make a pad chart because this looked like it would be extremely annoying to do on foot.

the song has potential, but the steps were way too simplistic, I spotted quite a few offsync notes, mostly the random colored ones that weren't necessary since most of the notes were fairly straightforward rhythm-wise. It's very understepped and lots of interesting sounds were ignored. It lacked consistency because you randomly switched which sounds you followed. Needs a lot more layering and some pitch relevance.

The fact that you kept the whole file at a halved BPM kinda irked me and I think it would fit better style-wise if you douled the BPM at the appropriate places. This is just for aesthetic reasons and it's not a technical issue.

Overall, this simfile isn't all that great but I hope you'll take my advice and learn how to make better ones.

dooey100 · 12-5-2007, 01:25 AM

Thanks, you were very helpful. I don't think I will make another file/fix up this one because I don't like the song as much now as I did when I first heard it. I read your guide though, And will probably make some more sims.

12-2-2007, 11:26 PM	#1
dooey100 FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 370	First sim: Phoenix Wright ReMix Hi guys, My first simfile, http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=21817 How is it?

12-5-2007, 12:20 AM	#2
dooey100 FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 370	Re: First sim: Phoenix Wright ReMix 200 credits to the first 3 people who review my sim! review doesn't have to be long, but has to be more than a rating out of 10.

12-5-2007, 01:11 AM	#3
ducky285 FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Cicero, IL Age: 39 Posts: 1,388	Re: First sim: Phoenix Wright ReMix Save your credits, I don't need them, but here's my review. This obviously isn't a pad file because of the 32nds during the long freezes so I'm judging it as a keyboard file. If it IS supposed to be for pad, you might want to learn how to make a pad chart because this looked like it would be extremely annoying to do on foot. the song has potential, but the steps were way too simplistic, I spotted quite a few offsync notes, mostly the random colored ones that weren't necessary since most of the notes were fairly straightforward rhythm-wise. It's very understepped and lots of interesting sounds were ignored. It lacked consistency because you randomly switched which sounds you followed. Needs a lot more layering and some pitch relevance. The fact that you kept the whole file at a halved BPM kinda irked me and I think it would fit better style-wise if you douled the BPM at the appropriate places. This is just for aesthetic reasons and it's not a technical issue. Overall, this simfile isn't all that great but I hope you'll take my advice and learn how to make better ones. __________________ Quack quack quack

12-5-2007, 01:25 AM	#4
dooey100 FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 370	Re: First sim: Phoenix Wright ReMix Thanks, you were very helpful. I don't think I will make another file/fix up this one because I don't like the song as much now as I did when I first heard it. I read your guide though, And will probably make some more sims.

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