03-2-2013, 06:25 PM | #1 |
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All My Good Starships Went Down Numb
Take a listen! My 3rd ever Remix.
I would LOVE it if you could tell me what you think. Your advice helps me alot. Thanks <3 https://soundcloud.com/djv1/all-my-good-starships-went
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03-2-2013, 06:43 PM | #2 |
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Re: All My Good Starships Went Down Numb
basses and percussion is veeeerryyy underwhelming.
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03-2-2013, 07:11 PM | #3 |
stargroup & me are <3'ers
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Yea bass and kick should come through more for sure. But overall really catchy, good synth work, keep improving
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03-3-2013, 11:54 AM | #4 | |
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Also, thank you both so much for your input <3
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03-3-2013, 12:33 PM | #5 |
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Bass definitely comes out more now I think
Also this may just be me being crazy.. but that chord thing at the very beginning seems just a tad off beat for me somehow..? Not noticeable when percussion and other instruments come and again it could be my brain farting |
03-3-2013, 01:03 PM | #6 | |
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Thanks man
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03-3-2013, 01:40 PM | #7 | ||
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And yeah I've been trying to experiment with that works well and what dosent. I guess for this song in particular it was more of a stereotypical club / dance song? I dunno. But seriously, what are your thoughts on this track below then? This track I did a few months ago really I think kind of gave a surprise to the listeners I think... I think this is more what you are looking for?(At 2:00 about) EDIT: Lol the first second is cutoff and i just realized it now. Gonna do a reupload of this https://soundcloud.com/djv1/party-young-style Quote:
Also, what section? I guess I cant tell from how long Ive listened to it lolz
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03-3-2013, 02:54 PM | #8 |
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03-3-2013, 04:57 PM | #9 |
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I was referring from like 0-8s. (and it continues throughout but sounds fine with everything on top of it)
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03-4-2013, 05:41 PM | #10 |
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