Sparka

[Anonymous]

Ho boy.

Reach's tip of the day - Read what you write outloud. It will save you many many gramatical errors and enhance the overall presentation of your story.

Look...read this outloud.

'An ordinary day in the peach grove was always full of customers demanding their sweet yet spicy peaches from the Baglot Peach Grove. Owned by Kimzukal who managed the grove. Walking back and forth through the isles of peach trees. About three to four feet tall covered in bright blumed sweet spicy peaches. '

I stopped reading there XD