Anata Ga Mawaru (IcyWorld) 4k

icontrolyourworld · 12-26-2013, 11:16 PM

2558 arrows in 3:12 (less nps, meaning not a gay file!)
256 bpm jumpstreams

Download: http://www.mediafire.com/download/h4...(IcyWorld).zip

**Dynam0** · 12-26-2013, 11:31 PM

Now we're talking

dling

icontrolyourworld · 12-26-2013, 11:34 PM

ffr212 · 12-26-2013, 11:35 PM

oh yes

Wafles · 12-26-2013, 11:38 PM

Played it. Pretty fun. Barely passed though.

The 12th minijacks don't really feel right to me and some of the sections feel a little unpolished but overall its still neat.

**Staiain** · 12-27-2013, 12:50 AM

I approve

icontrolyourworld · 12-27-2013, 12:57 AM

lol i typo'ed the thread title, the song is Anata Ga Mawaru, and I put Wamaru ffffffffff

icontrolyourworld · 12-27-2013, 02:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wafles

Played it. Pretty fun. Barely passed though.

The 12th minijacks don't really feel right to me and some of the sections feel a little unpolished but overall its still neat.

what parts felt unpolished o:

Wafles · 12-27-2013, 03:10 PM

Some of the 12th minijacks feel a bit random. I can kind of get a feel for what you were going for but idk they just didn't feel quite right. Especially prevelant in the first 20ish seconds of the song and right at the end.

37.111s - These 16ths arent accurate
44.595s - these two beats feel awkward and are hard to discern
55.574s - The 24th and 12th in the couple beats after this are really hard to feel when playing, if that makes sense. I think they're a bit too muddy to hear the rythms clearly. Same thing happens a few beats later.
88.125s - The section starting here it is kind of hard to discern when the vocal lands on an 8th or a 12th but it plays really well so not a big deal.
111.035s - 12ths here feel like they should be jumps but eh, i'm not too sure either. Still makes sense this way and jumps mightve been too dense idk
150.726s - For the life of me i cant hear this note. Does it go to the vocal? Cuz the ones right before it feel like they go to the tom.
176.765s - Feels off. I think the same thing happens a bit earlier in the file too.

The long 16ths sections are great but that shouldnt be a surprise since you've had lots of practice making jumpstream

Take my critique with a grain of salt though. I might just be talking out of my ass. File is still really fun and I like the song choice a lot as well.

icontrolyourworld · 12-27-2013, 04:04 PM

haha i appreciate reviews like this, i'll look over the sections after i finish this ~new~ file today. thanks wafles

12-26-2013, 11:16 PM	#1
icontrolyourworld Enjoy life! Join Date: Oct 2007 Age: 31 Posts: 4,182	Anata Ga Mawaru (IcyWorld) 4k 2558 arrows in 3:12 (less nps, meaning not a gay file!) 256 bpm jumpstreams Download: http://www.mediafire.com/download/h4...(IcyWorld).zip __________________ http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...d.php?t=149106 Last edited by icontrolyourworld; 12-26-2013 at 11:34 PM..

12-26-2013, 11:31 PM	#2
Dynam0 The Dominator Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: North Bay, ON Age: 35 Posts: 8,987	Re: Anata Ga Wamaru (IcyWorld) 4k Now we're talking dling

12-26-2013, 11:34 PM	#3
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12-26-2013, 11:38 PM	#5
Wafles FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 1,988	Re: Anata Ga Wamaru (IcyWorld) 4k Played it. Pretty fun. Barely passed though. The 12th minijacks don't really feel right to me and some of the sections feel a little unpolished but overall its still neat. __________________ http://smleaderboards.net/profile/view/Wafles

12-27-2013, 12:50 AM	#6
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12-27-2013, 12:57 AM	#7
icontrolyourworld Enjoy life! Join Date: Oct 2007 Age: 31 Posts: 4,182	Re: Anata Ga Wamaru (IcyWorld) 4k lol i typo'ed the thread title, the song is Anata Ga Mawaru, and I put Wamaru ffffffffff __________________ http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...d.php?t=149106

12-27-2013, 03:10 PM	#9
Wafles FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 1,988	Re: Anata Ga Mawaru (IcyWorld) 4k Some of the 12th minijacks feel a bit random. I can kind of get a feel for what you were going for but idk they just didn't feel quite right. Especially prevelant in the first 20ish seconds of the song and right at the end. 37.111s - These 16ths arent accurate 44.595s - these two beats feel awkward and are hard to discern 55.574s - The 24th and 12th in the couple beats after this are really hard to feel when playing, if that makes sense. I think they're a bit too muddy to hear the rythms clearly. Same thing happens a few beats later. 88.125s - The section starting here it is kind of hard to discern when the vocal lands on an 8th or a 12th but it plays really well so not a big deal. 111.035s - 12ths here feel like they should be jumps but eh, i'm not too sure either. Still makes sense this way and jumps mightve been too dense idk 150.726s - For the life of me i cant hear this note. Does it go to the vocal? Cuz the ones right before it feel like they go to the tom. 176.765s - Feels off. I think the same thing happens a bit earlier in the file too. The long 16ths sections are great but that shouldnt be a surprise since you've had lots of practice making jumpstream Take my critique with a grain of salt though. I might just be talking out of my ass. File is still really fun and I like the song choice a lot as well. __________________ http://smleaderboards.net/profile/view/Wafles

12-27-2013, 04:04 PM	#10
icontrolyourworld Enjoy life! Join Date: Oct 2007 Age: 31 Posts: 4,182	Re: Anata Ga Mawaru (IcyWorld) 4k haha i appreciate reviews like this, i'll look over the sections after i finish this ~new~ file today. thanks wafles __________________ http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...d.php?t=149106

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