All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

[Xiz]

Take a listen! My 3rd ever Remix.

I would LOVE it if you could tell me what you think. Your advice helps me alot. Thanks <3

https://soundcloud.com/djv1/all-my-good-starships-went

[YoshL]

basses and percussion is veeeerryyy underwhelming.

[behanjc]

Yea bass and kick should come through more for sure. But overall really catchy, good synth work, keep improving

[Xiz]

Originally Posted by YoshL

basses and percussion is veeeerryyy underwhelming.

Originally Posted by behanjc

Yea bass and kick should come through more for sure. But overall really catchy, good synth work, keep improving

Okay I remastered the track. You can click that same link to view it. How is it, is it a bit better?

Also, thank you both so much for your input <3

[behanjc]

Bass definitely comes out more now I think

Also this may just be me being crazy.. but that chord thing at the very beginning seems just a tad off beat for me somehow..? Not noticeable when percussion and other instruments come and again it could be my brain farting

[Xiz]

Originally Posted by KgZ

I mean, it sounds good because you're using the straight samples from top-professional produced music. But through a creative standpoint, there's not much to say. It's more of a dj medley set than a remix.

This is probz the best input ive got. Like legit. Why do you think this is not creative? I'm just curious.

Thanks man

[Xiz]

Originally Posted by KgZ

Well, I should apologize because I dislike calling something "uncreative." There were a few cool moments like 2:42 and it really felt like a moment where your personality as an artist came out.

Mashups are tricky because it can end up where the final track relies heavily on the original track's production quality, rather than show off your own interpretation or twist on existing material. Maybe you should try different songs with varying genres or emotional styles and mash up/remix/etc. those. Give the listener something unexpected that'll emotionally connect in new ways.

Yeah no worries, I know what you meant xD

And yeah I've been trying to experiment with that works well and what dosent. I guess for this song in particular it was more of a stereotypical club / dance song? I dunno.

But seriously, what are your thoughts on this track below then? This track I did a few months ago really I think kind of gave a surprise to the listeners I think... I think this is more what you are looking for?(At 2:00 about)

EDIT: Lol the first second is cutoff and i just realized it now. Gonna do a reupload of this

https://soundcloud.com/djv1/party-young-style

Originally Posted by behanjc

Bass definitely comes out more now I think

Also this may just be me being crazy.. but that chord thing at the very beginning seems just a tad off beat for me somehow..? Not noticeable when percussion and other instruments come and again it could be my brain farting

Sweet thanks.
Also, what section? I guess I cant tell from how long Ive listened to it lolz

[Coolboyrulez0]

Originally Posted by KgZ

Or you can put quad city's come on and slam to every song ever.

That works too.

I have done this over Megaman and Katawa Shoujo music

confirmed to work

[behanjc]

Originally Posted by Xiz

Also, what section? I guess I cant tell from how long Ive listened to it lolz

I was referring from like 0-8s. (and it continues throughout but sounds fine with everything on top of it)

[Choofers]

Originally Posted by Coolboyrulez0

I have done this over Katawa Shoujo music

you would lmao