Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open - Page 28

**Coolboyrulez0** · 11-28-2009, 11:44 PM

"Don't Say Lazy ~ Stepped the Chorus version" has been sent

if it gets rejected, i'll find another pack to send it to.

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-28-2009, 11:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gnr61

ah i'll send visitor but i guess i'll just hold on to battaglia then for reworking over break. i'd also be free to judge during that time but you guys seem to have that down pretty efficiently which is sweet 8) (does kil know about this pack btw lol)

Yeah send Visitor to the pack email rather than just depending on Kommi to forward it to the rest of us (because he's gonna forget again).

And yeah, Kil knows about the pack. He agreed with Kommi to merge DCP2 with X5 which I found pretty surprising.

Huzure · 11-29-2009, 12:06 AM

I know my step look like Pad Style.I will send other style later.

**Patashu** · 11-29-2009, 12:42 AM

who made visitor O_O

**gnr61** · 11-29-2009, 12:56 AM

its the dcp2 one i'm pretty sure u've played it ("beatrice")

**Patashu** · 11-29-2009, 01:21 AM

who is beatrice

**gnr61** · 11-29-2009, 01:26 AM

beatrice is kil

**i love you** · 11-29-2009, 02:06 AM

Wow, kil sure does have a lot of alts. >_>

N.T.M. · 11-29-2009, 02:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by i love you

Wow, kil sure does have a lot of alts. >_>

I know.

It's like you never know when he's watching.

Huzure · 11-29-2009, 02:33 AM

Send

Rex - Heart of Witch : Pad & Mega Keyboard.

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-29-2009, 02:34 AM

what is a mega keyboard

Huzure · 11-29-2009, 02:42 AM

I mean : hard than keyboard = =".

**Ghakimx** · 11-29-2009, 02:55 AM

You should try to AAA your English or something.

Huzure · 11-29-2009, 03:04 AM

My english is weak - -"

N.T.M. · 11-29-2009, 03:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ghakimx

You should try to AAA your English or something.

lol Be nice.

**kommisar** · 11-29-2009, 07:33 AM

mega keyboard

fklajefoijfioajsfioaj;foiesa

**kommisar** · 11-29-2009, 07:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

Yeah send Visitor to the pack email rather than just depending on Kommi to forward it to the rest of us (because he's gonna forget again).

And yeah, Kil knows about the pack. He agreed with Kommi to merge DCP2 with X5 which I found pretty surprising.

he was tired of seeing nothing being done with a dead pack and half a batch of files so

**Ghakimx** · 11-29-2009, 07:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Huzure

My english is weak - -"

Improve your Grammar Attack.

Edit: Location: Bangkok,Thailand
Explains everything.

moches · 12-1-2009, 01:40 AM

slasher blue- ugh don't like these patterns very much. don't like long freezes either but that's just personal preference really. light accep

apocalypse- i dunno about this one. i mean it's pretty well made and all but this wasn't very memorable imo. also dumb parts with random quads leading to random jacks.

EDIT: after looking it over, I also think some more freezes would give this file a bit more life.

magical voices shower- i didn't think i was going to quit out of this but i did sorry. steps don't feel very expressive of the song; basically feels like vocal notes with some of the percussion layered in.

pad files- no

bad maniacs- xmod is nice. good scoring file. light accep (maybe replace Chaosmaid with this?)

sketch switch- tbh I found this kinda boring and it has mahoro de mambo syndrome (which is AAAA fodder followed by a crapload of handsmashing.) i'll leave this to the other judges

EDIT: after looking this over it was actually pretty good and I'll accept. sorry but I felt kind of crappy at the time. my notes on the handsmashing still apply to some degree though. but I digress

888- pretty accurate file but sort of annoying actually. 32nds in the beginning were patterned pretty badly and once I got to the triple jacks going to synth I just quit out because sorry it didn't feel too good

blood for justice- mines are tacky decorations in this file: they serve little to no purpose. rest was fine but meh it just seems like you took v1 and replaced some notes with mines. nothing much to note here.

jumper v2- what a difference a song cut makes. I enjoyed this now (there's a weird thing with Capsule's songs where I hate them the first time and then the second time is so much better) and I'll accept this. there's never really been a file like this and this pack needs something really unique.

love magic- and TWO new dimentio files in the same Xoon pack? looks like it just may happen this time. I was surprised at how much fun this was; awesome old-school style, innovative mine usage, etc. also that first part with the 16ths was absolutely fantastic. if you haven't figured it out by now accepted like fuc

princess mononokebutou- this started off sort of crappy with the jumps which I couldn't figure out at all but the 8th part after that was kind of cool (I noticed a semi-pitch relevant pattern in there somewhere, so kudos.) the rest of the file was just boring faux breakbeats crossed with jap music. although this wasn't too good I still see you're getting better at layering sounds to express the music so keep stepping.

tender kiss- why was I hitting greats by trying to MA this. also hi Sharpnel alias (not really but wow I seriously thought this sounded like Sharpnel and played like Sharpnel too)

volcano- this song reminds me of something LED would make. file's the better of the two this time around mostly because I can tell what all the jumps go to. song could have potential as a jack theory-ish type of file. needs fixes though; you're missing notes here and there, a few dumb random parts and misrhythms and a lot of the patterns were pulled out of thin air (meaning learn to PR or otherwise.)

don't say lazy- imo I'd keep the freezes limited to a few longer ones; the freeze syndrome makes this file feel sort of amateurish. not too bad otherwise but I doubt this is packworthy

that scar symmetry file- what I did play was damn offsync and why is this 12ths

**kommisar** · 12-1-2009, 07:55 AM

new dimentio file?

gettin

11-28-2009, 11:44 PM	#541
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 30 Posts: 10,031	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open "Don't Say Lazy ~ Stepped the Chorus version" has been sent if it gets rejected, i'll find another pack to send it to.

11-29-2009, 12:06 AM	#543
Huzure FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Bangkok,Thailand Age: 31 Posts: 30	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open I know my step look like Pad Style.I will send other style later. __________________

11-29-2009, 12:42 AM	#544
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 33 Posts: 8,609	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open who made visitor O_O __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

11-29-2009, 12:56 AM	#545
gnr61 FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: TOKYO STYLE SPEEDCORE, ohio Age: 33 Posts: 7,251	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open its the dcp2 one i'm pretty sure u've played it ("beatrice") __________________ squirrel--it's whats for dinner.

11-29-2009, 01:21 AM	#546
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 33 Posts: 8,609	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open who is beatrice __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

11-29-2009, 01:26 AM	#547
gnr61 FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: TOKYO STYLE SPEEDCORE, ohio Age: 33 Posts: 7,251	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open beatrice is kil __________________ squirrel--it's whats for dinner.

11-29-2009, 02:06 AM	#548
i love you Live a wonderful life~ Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 7,313	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Wow, kil sure does have a lot of alts. >_> __________________ =============================== The idea that RDCP 3 may come out in the future is a fun thought to have~ ===============================

11-29-2009, 02:33 AM	#550
Huzure FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Bangkok,Thailand Age: 31 Posts: 30	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Send Rex - Heart of Witch : Pad & Mega Keyboard. __________________

11-29-2009, 02:34 AM	#551
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open what is a mega keyboard __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

11-29-2009, 02:42 AM	#552
Huzure FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Bangkok,Thailand Age: 31 Posts: 30	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open I mean : hard than keyboard = =". __________________

11-29-2009, 02:55 AM	#553
Ghakimx Cutie&Handshaking Sounds Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Xingapore Posts: 1,594	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open You should try to AAA your English or something. __________________ I AM ASHAMED OF MY STUPIDITY AND MUST COMMIT SEPPUKU. FORGIVE ME, FFR. Ninjas NEVER die. Now on a 30 kill streak.

11-29-2009, 03:04 AM	#554
Huzure FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Bangkok,Thailand Age: 31 Posts: 30	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open My english is weak - -" __________________

11-29-2009, 07:33 AM	#556
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open mega keyboard fklajefoijfioajsfioaj;foiesa __________________

12-1-2009, 01:40 AM	#559
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 29 Posts: 3,996	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open slasher blue- ugh don't like these patterns very much. don't like long freezes either but that's just personal preference really. light accep apocalypse- i dunno about this one. i mean it's pretty well made and all but this wasn't very memorable imo. also dumb parts with random quads leading to random jacks. EDIT: after looking it over, I also think some more freezes would give this file a bit more life. magical voices shower- i didn't think i was going to quit out of this but i did sorry. steps don't feel very expressive of the song; basically feels like vocal notes with some of the percussion layered in. pad files- no bad maniacs- xmod is nice. good scoring file. light accep (maybe replace Chaosmaid with this?) sketch switch- tbh I found this kinda boring and it has mahoro de mambo syndrome (which is AAAA fodder followed by a crapload of handsmashing.) i'll leave this to the other judges EDIT: after looking this over it was actually pretty good and I'll accept. sorry but I felt kind of crappy at the time. my notes on the handsmashing still apply to some degree though. but I digress 888- pretty accurate file but sort of annoying actually. 32nds in the beginning were patterned pretty badly and once I got to the triple jacks going to synth I just quit out because sorry it didn't feel too good blood for justice- mines are tacky decorations in this file: they serve little to no purpose. rest was fine but meh it just seems like you took v1 and replaced some notes with mines. nothing much to note here. jumper v2- what a difference a song cut makes. I enjoyed this now (there's a weird thing with Capsule's songs where I hate them the first time and then the second time is so much better) and I'll accept this. there's never really been a file like this and this pack needs something really unique. love magic- and TWO new dimentio files in the same Xoon pack? looks like it just may happen this time. I was surprised at how much fun this was; awesome old-school style, innovative mine usage, etc. also that first part with the 16ths was absolutely fantastic. if you haven't figured it out by now accepted like fuc princess mononokebutou- this started off sort of crappy with the jumps which I couldn't figure out at all but the 8th part after that was kind of cool (I noticed a semi-pitch relevant pattern in there somewhere, so kudos.) the rest of the file was just boring faux breakbeats crossed with jap music. although this wasn't too good I still see you're getting better at layering sounds to express the music so keep stepping. tender kiss- why was I hitting greats by trying to MA this. also hi Sharpnel alias (not really but wow I seriously thought this sounded like Sharpnel and played like Sharpnel too) volcano- this song reminds me of something LED would make. file's the better of the two this time around mostly because I can tell what all the jumps go to. song could have potential as a jack theory-ish type of file. needs fixes though; you're missing notes here and there, a few dumb random parts and misrhythms and a lot of the patterns were pulled out of thin air (meaning learn to PR or otherwise.) don't say lazy- imo I'd keep the freezes limited to a few longer ones; the freeze syndrome makes this file feel sort of amateurish. not too bad otherwise but I doubt this is packworthy that scar symmetry file- what I did play was damn offsync and why is this 12ths

12-1-2009, 07:55 AM	#560
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open new dimentio file? gettin __________________

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