New Track.

**brothaice** · 01-30-2008, 11:26 PM

Sorry for myspace.

Constructive criticism please and thanks.

The first one.

www.myspace.com/tetsumusic

nubbin149 · 01-31-2008, 09:59 AM

It's cool to see new people starting out .. ( says the guy that started out 2 months ago LOL)
It sounds like they were made in fruity loops to be honest.
don't take this offensively as you just started and i will say you seem to know music.

try to keep things from being incredibly repetitive. Which can be really hard in the genre you've decided to pursue. Work on some different dynamics layering and what not

(this is all i can offer you as i've never even attempted trance or house.

**brothaice** · 01-31-2008, 03:48 PM

Yes i realize they are repetitive. I'm workin on that.

01-30-2008, 11:26 PM	#1
brothaice FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Age: 33 Posts: 2,940	New Track. Sorry for myspace. Constructive criticism please and thanks. The first one. www.myspace.com/tetsumusic

01-31-2008, 09:59 AM	#2
nubbin149 FFR Player Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 303	Re: New Track. It's cool to see new people starting out .. ( says the guy that started out 2 months ago LOL) It sounds like they were made in fruity loops to be honest. don't take this offensively as you just started and i will say you seem to know music. try to keep things from being incredibly repetitive. Which can be really hard in the genre you've decided to pursue. Work on some different dynamics layering and what not (this is all i can offer you as i've never even attempted trance or house.

01-31-2008, 03:48 PM	#3
brothaice FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Age: 33 Posts: 2,940	Re: New Track. Yes i realize they are repetitive. I'm workin on that.

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