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Old 03-20-2011, 04:30 AM   #1
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Just a demo.
http://catchswitchauto.bandcamp.com/track/demo

8=D

any comments or crap appreciated
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Old 03-20-2011, 04:40 AM   #2
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it was the shit until 1:10 then you went in a different direction and i went whaaa but the rest is still dope just doesnt fit with the first half
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Old 03-20-2011, 05:54 AM   #3
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yeah i didn't really do anything on the 2nd half but stick in some loops and crap around. btw made in renoise

edit: i'm gonna rip out 1:10+ and save it for another time
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Old 03-20-2011, 10:34 AM   #4
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Old 03-20-2011, 06:26 PM   #5
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Some of the sounds, specifically the ones that sound like they're bandpassed, are WAY too piercing, and need to be brought down in the mix. Too loud. I really liked the half-tempo section at around 50 seconds. That was a neat little break. Generally, the whole thing just seems TOO random. The synths especially. There doesn't seem to be any underlying melodic structure up until after a minute when you go into that whole major melody. Then distorted amens come in. It's all just a bit odd. However, you're definitely on your way to better IDM stuff. Keep working at it.

EDIT: Oh, and uh, nice to see someone on here other than me using Renoise. *brofist*.
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Old 03-20-2011, 06:38 PM   #6
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That was really good... o.O

I do quite like.
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Old 03-20-2011, 07:35 PM   #7
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Pretty sweet. Sounds great and flows well imo. However, I do believe that 1:10+ sounds like it should not be there but yet sounds great at the same time. Haha.
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Thanks for the feedback, all. I might try something else today with the advice.
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