Ideas

[danny53x]

I make a lot of little doodles around a minute long but I don't really know too much how to expand on it. I tend to construct whatever the middle of the song should be. Can you give me some tips?

Here's some stuff I've been playing around with

http://soundcloud.com/yotipo91/gateway-remix-wip
http://soundcloud.com/yotipo91/12-4-10-6

and whatever else is on my soundcloud

[who_cares973]

12-4-10-6 sounds really really really awesome

[danny53x]

Thanks. I need to learn how to transition better though. The remix one is just a little edit I did to a friend's fruity loops song.

[DarkbearX]

While it's really hard to explain how to write intros/outros/progressions (most of it's just creativity, really), I can tell you that at around :50ish on GATEWAY that I expected a hard-hitting "drop" with that same supersaw lead (very nice melody, btw, I'd find a way to counter it though personally). So yeah, up to you ultimately, but I'd make something hard-hitting at that point.

Both of these are awesome, but it takes a whole song for me to be able to actually enjoy or critque properly; there's usually not enough to go off of on demos. But still, great job. :>