06-22-2008, 06:26 PM
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Criticize My Art Please?
Ok, well I have a couple small things floating around and I wanted to know how I could improve them/get your thoughts on them.
Bubble:  Smiley:  A button that you press of some sort:  Random:  There was empty space so I put the Bubble in  Thanks for commenting. EDIT: I'm not sure why, but the backgrounds got messed up during upload.. EDIT 2: Took BG's off because they got messed up :\
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06-22-2008, 07:03 PM
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Re: Criticize My Art Please?
Here's an idea, make something that isn't a circle
 But really, how did you make Ichigo or was it just a copy and paste? >.>
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06-22-2008, 07:08 PM
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Re: Criticize My Art Please?
Yea, I was messing with the circles a lot..
I cut Ichigo out [along with the Hollow Mask thing]. I copied and pasted so there were 4 Ichigos. I changed the Hue & Saturation [colors] and added layers to make the Ichigos behind each other.
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06-22-2008, 08:50 PM
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Re: Criticize My Art Please?
I like the bubble, however, I think it shouldn't fade to white so suddenly.
Perhaps add some more blue. The smiley and button aren't that bad either.  As for the Bleach graphic... I think that you should blur the edges of Ichigo. They are pixelly. Take the masks out all together. Change the opacity on the colored versions of him so that they fade more and more to black. Find something else to fill the space, change the opacitity so Ichigo stands out first. Merely suggestions.
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06-22-2008, 08:55 PM
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Re: Criticize My Art Please?
keep on learning and expanding yur talents ^_^ . looks like youve been following a few photoshop tutorials
... which is good. keep learnign new techniques and eventually throw them all together to make something awesome 
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06-22-2008, 09:05 PM
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Re: Criticize My Art Please?
I like the bubble.
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06-22-2008, 09:22 PM
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Re: Criticize My Art Please?
So I am guessing you used my copy/paste different colors technique.
I like how you used it, and it looks like he moved really quick. You can learn tons of stuff from other people's pictures. Also that button would be really good if you took out the black line. You should not have blurred the bubble around the edges. Other than that keep at it. You will only get better, and never stick to one technique. You build your palette with tons of ideas, and then you mix them throughout your art portfolio.
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