FFR Community Pack

[buizel8888]

www.filefront.com

[TD_boredom]

Thank youz ^-^

Sent file link =)

[trumaestro]

I sent a file to this pack just because I don't want to wait a month for RF judges to review my file.

So yeah.

[omgitznpv]

problem is, i'm still not cutting it due to the fact that i don't believe in songcutting, as previously stated, haha. unless people start biting my head off, i won't also i know im sounding like a douche

sent in 蓬莱の玉、どこまでも美しく(竹取飛翔　～ Lunatic Princess).

[Nightfirecat]

Originally Posted by omgitznpv

A POINTLESS 5 SECOND SONG

Excite bike? Whar?


And yeah.. I need to go get the batch 2 files >.> *is lazy and has way too much stuff to do on the weekend*

[omgitznpv]

Originally Posted by Nightfirecat

Excite bike? Whar?

It's a gay song he probably made (didn't check) called dicks.

I've only accepted one file out of nine in this entire batch so far, and that file is mine (for obvious reasons. Also keep it mind I don't go out and auto-accept any dump I step, lol). trumaestro's (or however) was the only other decent one, and that still could be a lot better IMO.

[kommisar[os]]

ok more reviews



(Trumaestro) Blood for justice [***] - Not a bad file, however a few things bothered me: the beginning some patterns are a little messy and the freezes aren't necessary. Quads weren't placed well neither they were followed as triples earlier in the song. Some parts the 4th beats fall on 8th beats i'm not sure if there's a way to fix that. Other than that i won't get into technical details since it was pretty fun to play


Concertino in Blue - Thanks for crashing my sm


(Boredom) Deep Breath[*] - Quit out. Why did you put the main beat on 16th notes? Didn't follow the beginning piano exactly and the song is long and boring. Later on you start following invisible 16th (8th and 4th in this case) patterns.


(EnR) I <3 Voltage [***] - Wow really fun file. The beginning, though, doesnt have 64th notes take those out. Also the jacks could've been avoided to make it flow better. Fun AAA nonetheless.


Nanairopanda - Rebirth already did a better version


Tribe Attacker - Leadafro and necros already did a better version


(npv) Lunatic Princess[*] - Sorry dumpstreams don't make a good file. Heavy is a maybe

[omgitznpv]

haha I kinda expected something like that from the lunatic princess. the oni and the edit don't matter and i decided to make something pointless right before i submitted it hehe

*edit*

since kommi posted his reviews, i guess i will do the same with mine.



Batch 2 Reviews - omgitznpv



Vifta Med Haenderna (buizel8888)

x/xxxx

no. PR is off on some spots, such as the jacks. some of the jack usage can be improved, too.
gets repetitive near the end.
check the sync on some spots because there's a few that don't seem right. i'm not going back to check though because you have other things to fix up
i'll have to agree that this definitely works better as a pad file, lol.
32nd jump jack thingies are really dumb.
some other things to check up on but whatever




Nanairopanda (Dorama)

xx/xxxx

I'll admit that I found this to be pretty fun. Still, though, it's pretty bad.
Doesn't flow very well; transitions from one part to another are kind of bad (light -> hard stuff)
Bad hold usage; it's hard to follow it and they're not too fun
Please don't step stuff that's barely audible and becomes inaudible with keytaps.
There's some stuff you missed, too.



Concertino Blue (DoctorSerpentine)

x/xxxx

pretty lame. have you heard of holds?
how about actually syncing the guitar correctly?
climax is stepped pretty lightly. get some knowledge of music as well.
plenty of opportuities for hands and stuff, and this has a lot more potential anyways.




Tribe Attacker (DoctorSerpentine)

x/xxxx

This is also pretty lame. use holds. there are some technical inaccuracies as well.
Some of the layering was done well, but some of it was also done pretty badly.
Bring out what's to be paid attention to in the music by actually stepping them.



dicks (robertsona)

-x/xxxx

Don't even waste our time. If you're going to do something like this, make it 30 seconds or more and painful.



I <3 Voltage (EnR)

xx/xxxx

Eh...no, but it's still pretty decent.
The first 23 measures or so weren't really too fun or great.
m16- there should be a hold before the 12th hold as well.
There's a few technical inaccuracies; check them out on a lower rate.
Some stuff could be more PR (oh god i am a huge ****** with this concept).
The jacks you did use were kind of annoying. There were opportunities for more fun jacks elsewhere.
Recheck jump placement. Too lazy to go back and find out, but I'm pretty sure there were a few misused.



Deep Breath (TD_boredom)

x/xxxx

YNS (Yellow Note Syndrome)- obviously you don't know about offsetting. F11/F12.
Exited out. Not fun, really; you missed a lot of stuff, the PR is terrible.
Very inconsistent, and from what I played, it was very reptitive. I can't imagine how terrible the whole thing is.





Blood for Justice (trumaestro)

xx/xxxx

Pretty fun file, but it still has a bunch of problems.
Try stepping the slide sound thingies at measure 9/10-ish. No idea if it's going to be good, though, but it sounds like it should be stepped. If you tried it, already, then leave it.
m27 could be hands.
m29 or whatever-m37 or whatever and anything like that- try stepping the guitar as holds?
m38-45 or w/e area- lots of technical errors here.




蓬莱の玉、どこまでも美しく(竹取飛翔　～ Lunatic Princess) (npv)

3.5x/xxxx

My own file. I think it's pretty cool, but it's not amazing. The oni and edit charts are dumps, though, haha. The holds are a little tough, too.

[kommisar[os]]

don't rate your own files. defeats the purpose of having more than one judge


thus you're being very biased



oh forgot two files


(Carla) Get Ready to Rokk [***] - Well this is different. You try to be very minimalist in your style of stepping, yet it delivers a simple yet fun experience. The mine tricks were pretty cool although i think some weren't really necessary. Pitch Relevancy was almost perfect throughout the song. Also good job on synching the ending, whoever you are. Never really heard of you to be honest lol.


(Carla) Storm [**] - I honestly don't know what to say about this. It's not a technical dump (with the exception of a few mistakes) but it's not all that interesting neither. ps good job on stepping one of the worst songs on the pump it up soundtrack rofl

[EnR]

Yea, the jacks were there because when I was going through .30x it was there xD

[Coolboyrulez0]

no one wants to make me cdtitle so I guess I just submit my file without one :/

[EnR]

Just fonts, I find your name looks better in cursif style.

[moches]

Attention everyone

BATCH 2 is closed

7. Carla- Get Ready To Rokk
8. Carla- Storm
9. DoctorSerpentine- Tribe Attacker
10. DoctorSerpentine- Concertino in Blue
11. robertsona- dicks
12. EnR- 1 <3 Voltage
13. Td_boredom- Deep Breath
14. trumaestro- Blood for Justice
15. buizel8888- Vifta Med Haende Ma
16. dorama- Nanairopanda
17. omgitznpv- The Lunatic Princess

Get Ready To Rokk- ***1/2 Whoever Carla is, he knows what the heck he’s doing. This is one of my favorite batch files. Well layered and thought-out, following the vocals would have made it even cooler though. +1/2 for mine usage.

Storm- ** Yeah, see, this is exactly what I’m talking about. Even with a song like this, Carla still tries to make it the best that he can. Some minifreezes seemed off, fix those. Kinda cool hip-hop chart.

Tribe Attacker- ** same thing, .rar file. Also, wasn’t this released?

Concertino in Blue- ** see Tribe Attacker.

dicks- * sorry, my computer can’t read .rar files. Can you .zip this by any chance? I’m only giving it 1 star since the concept is just dumb.

1 <3 Voltage- ***1/2 I’ll say EnR has really shocked me with this file. The pitch relevancy was nice, and freezes were good. The minijacks are the only minor flaw, and it could be layered more at time. Fun.

Deep Breath-* Bad sync, missing notes at times. Sorry.

Blood for Justice- *** Pretty sweet file, quads made no sense, should have been triples. At points hold use seemed inconsistent. This is really super fun though, so well done!

Vifta Med Haende Ma- ** The layering seemed sort of inconsistent at times, try to keep consistency in your following of the song. It’s pretty damn sweet for indexers though.

Nanairopanda- ** my computer can’t read .rar files. .zip this so I can try it.

The Lunatic Princess- ***1/2 I’ll be honest and say that Edit and Oni are both pretty dumpy. You’re better off with Heavy, which was just about as close to perfect as you could get it.

BATCH 3 has now started.

[EnR]

12. EnR- 1 <3 Voltage

I not 1

[moches]

Whoops.

Edited.

Oh, and I can't be sure until Nightfire does his reviews, but I think Blood for Justice, Get Ready 2 Rokk, and I <3 Voltage are at acceptance level. The Lunatic Princess is pretty close too.

[kommisar[os]]

what if carla was a chick

[omgitznpv]

lmao

also just go ahead and delete my oni and edit charts for lunatic princess if you want because i never really cared for them anyways haha

[Carla-misu]

hey guys. i don't usually post on forums but just saying thanks for having a look at my submissions <3 i had a little help though. Expect more stuff from me soon.


ps: i'm a girl but i'm taken ^^ just so nobody tries anything creepy

[omgitznpv]

Get Ready To Rokk (Carla)

xxx/xxxx

woop. It's pretty fun with a few minor issues. PR is off at a few parts, but I'm probably the only one who cares a lot.
Some of the hold length/usage could be improved as well.
Gap is off by 10 ms or so. Mines were used well and were really fun.



Storm (Carla)

xx/xxxx

I find this really fun, but it has a bunch of noticeable problems.
The hold usage in the beginning isn't really that effective or good. The PR is also off in some spots, maybe in the beginning (I forget)
You missed a few things here and there, as well.
Hand usage was strange; you used hands on some parts but other parts that were more accented had only jumps.




*edit*

wow my gachagacha hertz figu@radio is terrible so far. if its still terrible when i finish it and nobody can help me improve it, i'll just scrap this and pull out gachagacha cute figu@mate since i want the two together

*edit 2*

moches, keep in mind dicks is a 5 second song. the required length is 30 seconds.

also the batches seem kind of short, really.

[sakura080789]

i think i will have to start stepping some more now cause i want one of my files in a pack even though my files suck