Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

[choof]

where putaria

[MinaciousGrace]

reviews today after i dump another half a day into tyranny

[lofty rhino]

@choof you need to let me know if you have intentions of finishing the collab file. If not, I'm going to have to chart the rest.

[choof]

I'll work on it this week

[MinaciousGrace]

Addiction 451 (broomtheatre) - That intro oh my god dme flashbacks. I have no idea what's going on with the file or song but I'm fairly certain I found it fun.
accepted by decree of lord loftysaurus due to my confused ambivalence

Do You Freeze it? (hamsterdam) - Freezestream:


From what I understand lofty is working with you on revising this and it's accepted pending said revisions. I mostly don't mind the file as-is personally however I really think you failed to capture the vocal intensity and pitch dynamic at 104.1s, other than that there's some rough stuff but nothing else that I strongly feel needs to be addressed.
chill leisure dump for the less skilled

Old Yeller (laffytaffy) - I'm not a huge fan of how abruptly the intro 32nds fall away into 16ths. I understand why you did it but I'd prefer to see 32nds interspersed throughout the intro. Once again great non-conventional pattern use rooted in strong technical fundamentals. Good job.
lofty thinks the song is meh but hes dumb

Pun-ishment (quim) - Wow you took this song in a completely different direction than I would have. There are some super nitpicky details that I want to fix (like an 8th anchor starting a note late halfway through the file). I also find myself wondering why you chose not to place a jumptrill starting at 93.2s when you had done so to the same sound everywhere else. There are some really cool things going on in the instrumentals that I think you captured well, however I also think the file would be greatly served by using 16th minitrill patterns in the section rather than minirolls.
vocals in the song are kinda meh imo i could be dum tho

purediarrhea (deluge) - Some of the patterning in this is excellent, but unfortunately this suffers from the same systemic issue shared by most of the other rejected files. About half the file is 5 nps and the other half is 30; the ending spikes to over 40 with mash inducing patterns reminiscent of spica. The result is an uneven play experience that almost inevitably results in frustration and a lack of satisfaction. Not what the pack is looking for.
file isn't that bad tbh but i couldn't pass up the wordplay

[choof]

so should I tone down the ending or make the beginning harder lol
probably tone down the ending

edit: lol "deluge"

[lofty rhino]

The whole file would need a structural reworking given that the "song" was no longer the "song" you chose.

[choof]

i have no idea what that means

[lofty rhino]

It means: try again.

[choof]

okay i tone down ending and resend 2 u

[lofty rhino]

Don't do it.

[Buta-san]

k buffed up the entire intro

[lofty rhino]

Got it.
Thanks, Porky!

[choof]

sent cbr's op

[lofty rhino]

Yah I sent it to Mina as soon as a I received it.
Should have some reviews soonish

[MinaciousGrace]

Cardiopulmonary Resuscitation Certified Operator [CPR Op] (loafers) - Solid file. If the ending weren't so hard I'd like to see the slow section more fleshed out, but it's fine. The last few measures of the 32nds are super right hand triplet biased so if you want to fluff out the hand balance a bit that's up to you.
wayner

Stop n gimmie a lifty (squintaclemonster) - Amusing song/chart. Fun to play. There are some nitpicky as fuck things like the super close mines at 105 but I'll change them.
tickle dat cat

Hold the Line (wafles)
k

[lofty rhino]

Originally Posted by MinaciousGrace

wayner

**DING* *DING* *DING**

CONGRATULATIONS CHOOBERS


Give me my fucking collab, bitch.

[choof]

maybe when ur're'ere aolder?! !

[Cataclysm-]

Just wondering what that the status on my file was. If I need to make any changes or whatever.

[MinaciousGrace]

ur good to go, theres like one or two really awkward notes in the ending stream but i can iron them out