Breakcore anybody?

[danny53x]

I rarely post on the musician's forum and I don't know how things are run here, but could I get some honest critique on a 5/4 time signature breakcore drum loop? Try not to be biased.

I was inspired by Venetian Snares' Swindon which is in a 7/4 time signature. Over the past year I've really got a knack for complex time signatures but I never really tried to incorporate them into the stuff I make. Here's a shot at 5/4... just for reference you might know the theme song to the well known movie "Halloween". It's composed in 5/4. So, just tell me what you think of it and whether or not you think I should expand upon this style or maybe it's just not my thing.

I submitted it as a song rather than a loop because it was more than half a minute. The song's called Nen.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/207281

I could always add synths, but it doesn't really matter. I made this in an hour or so.