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Old 06-9-2011, 03:05 AM   #165
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Default Re: FFR Community Pack Summer 2011 (Submissions Open)

Caipirinha (IOSYS Remix) V2 (BeatofIke)
M58 could've used mines to fill up the empty gap. M70, you missed this spot when changing up the vocal holds cause they're both on the same notes still (probably missed it by accident so I can fix this for you). Still on the repetitive side but at least it's more interesting and patterns are varied up. Yes

Final Audition Episode 2-X (Razor)
M32 the [1][12] minijack didn't seem all that necessary since it doesn't emphasize anything and you aren't using it consistently throughout; Shift the pattern around to avoid it. M60 I don't get why you ignored percussion when you decided to layer it at the instance of Beat 247. Beat 258, same deal with that [1][12] minijack being unnecessary. There's a real lack of pitch relevancy in this file, which isn't that major of an issue but the random patterns you've used don't -feel- relevant to the song at hand. My biggest issue with this file is the pattern usage. It's very one tracked and linear so to speak since I'm seeing the exact same one handed trills and staircase patterns over and over again. Where's the pattern variation? The layering for the file itself is passable but this needs reworking in terms of patterns. I suggest playing around with the pitch relevancy to achieve some different patterns. No

Ivory Tower (SulferDragon)
Holds are a tad too long in length, so I'd trim them down a bit. Jacks added a nice scoring factor. However compared to your other 3 submissions, I think this is the weaker of them since it's rather long and repetitive with not too much variation in the song or in layering. I'll think about this one because I want to keep open slots for other simfile authors who have yet to get a file in the pack Maybe

Under the Glass Moon (SulferDragon)
Jacks made this interesting to playthrough and adds scoring factor. Solid and enjoyable file. Yes

Sphere 5 (SulferDragon)
Classic SulferDragon VGM file. No real commentary, both charts are great and fun to play. Yes

Samsara and Paramnesia (SulferDragon)
Classic SulferDragon VGM file. No real commentary, file's great and fun to play. Yes

Magus Night (Kaneh)
I'll be honest but this doesn't seem like a Kaneh file at all, lol. Totally different from what I initially expected coming from you. File's great and enjoyable overall. Yes

Piece of History (bmah)
Rainbow trill at Beat 134 might be hard for beginner-intermediate players. Layering is great and file is enjoyable. Yes

Mosaic (Rebound)
M52-53 is a pretty nasty difficulty spike but it captures the climax well, lol. This file's good for mine dodging practice and is enjoyable to play. Yes


50 file milestone. I think I'll accept up to 5 more files before closing submissions so if you want a file in the pack now's your last chance.
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