[jakeyjake7]

Some of the sounds, specifically the ones that sound like they're bandpassed, are WAY too piercing, and need to be brought down in the mix. Too loud. I really liked the half-tempo section at around 50 seconds. That was a neat little break. Generally, the whole thing just seems TOO random. The synths especially. There doesn't seem to be any underlying melodic structure up until after a minute when you go into that whole major melody. Then distorted amens come in. It's all just a bit odd. However, you're definitely on your way to better IDM stuff. Keep working at it.

EDIT: Oh, and uh, nice to see someone on here other than me using Renoise. *brofist*.