[SulferDragon]

A Parenthesis in Eternity - Work on it - Some pattern variation at the beginning might be a good idea.
Minifreeze streams kind of make sense, I guess, but I'd like to see them removed.
Measures 107-122 are completely overdone. At least compared to the rest of the file.
Measures 129-130 are offbeat.
Measure 132 is offbeat.
You didn't step some drum sounds here and there.
I think it would be better if you stepped the drums instead of the guitar at the end. If it's to much trouble to sync, leave it.
I'm digging the song. Fix this.

Hurry Somebody Up - Accepted - It's good. Guilty Gear <3

Native File - Work on it - I don't know. The file just isn't that appealing. If N.T.M. liked it I might accept it though.

The Fall of an Empire - Work on it - This is fun.
Make those minifreezes in measures 24-25 48th or 64th notes long.
This is every measure you stepped the drums incorrectly in: 30, 44, 60, 93, 94, 99, 103, 114, 116, 170, 178, 181, 203, 207, 213, 264, 265
The errors in 234, 236 may be correct, but they aren't consistent with other parts of the file.
Next time you're stepping something this long, consider a cut.