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Old 06-22-2008, 08:50 PM   #4
sarahxjane
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Default Re: Criticize My Art Please?

I like the bubble, however, I think it shouldn't fade to white so suddenly.
Perhaps add some more blue.

The smiley and button aren't that bad either.

As for the Bleach graphic...

I think that you should blur the edges of Ichigo. They are pixelly.
Take the masks out all together.
Change the opacity on the colored versions of him so that they fade more and more to black.

Find something else to fill the space, change the opacitity so Ichigo stands out first.

Merely suggestions.
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