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Old 04-28-2008, 09:48 PM   #539
kommisar[os]
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Default Re: FFR Community Pack

ok reviewed while i had time

nebula 2/5 : imaginary jumps at the beginning, didn't follow pr at all. later on you forget all the jumps for percussion beats and you forget a bunch of 32nds. sorry just doesn't cut it. Song has soooo much potential though...


Desperate struggle 2/5 : some parts in the melody weren't stepped correctly (some parts should've been jacks) and some triples didn't really follow anything and should've been placed elsewhere. Also the jump jacks right at the beginning aren't very fun. Missed some parts in the drum patterns. Pitch relevancy is ignored. I don't hear any 24th notes (they're probably 32nds)

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