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EMOTIONZ Posted on: April 26, 2008, at 12:32:38am okay lets start from the beginning: there were these things i that i kept in MY BOX and no...they werent my fav pair of sox there were these quarrelsome things...emotions they fill ppl up like a thousand + 2 oceans there was happy, sad, there was dopey there was glad... there was anger and depression and all they did was build up tension so one day i let them all out i left them out to scream and to shout they played all day they played all night they played until they finally thought it wasnt right they cleaned up evrything all the muck, scum, sharp objects that sting... and they took it all with them bak into MY BOX... itz funny cuz after that they never came bak out... and MY BOX... well it doesnt even have locks soo y? i think i kno... lettin them play isnt exactly ma peice of pie... so i keep them inside... and i lie... to u, ppl, and even myself... i say im fine but really i will never let u inside my mind... so accept i im not God, im not divine and i know these poems may shock but u kno wat??? i accidentely threw out the lock... to MY BOX,EMOTIONS,... MY FRONT AND BAK THEY'RE OPEN... but i dare u come close... try to attack... cuz all u'll feel iz a slight discomfort...tho a lethal dose and then... smack!!! u never hurt me again... i killed u n im leaving...im on the last train... am i a runaway emotion??? no...actually two confusion and hurt thatz wat im going thru... but hey emotions are for the weak... thats why i found those two and all the others... n even tho i threw away the lock... now im goin to use glue |
Posted at 12:58pm on April 26th, 2008
fuckin AWESOME BE-OTCH!! hey u get ur poem talentz from mua right here lol jk but seriously AWESOME! DA BOMB!!!
Posted at 1:54pm on April 26th, 2008
wow u write good poetry. its god that u let everything out keeping it in would give u nervous breakdowns and believe me u don't want them.
Posted at 8:39pm on April 26th, 2008
thats so awesome. i like its its so cool:)
Posted at 8:40pm on April 26th, 2008
i love love love every part of it its like soooo damn awesome.
Posted at 8:41pm on April 26th, 2008
good poetry skills love. i wish i could write poetry. whenever i write it lik totally sucks.:(:) ur better than me and ur avi is like so adorable:)
Posted at 9:52am on April 27th, 2008
yoo..that was greatt!!..i love that poem..and its madd you...watch though..one of these days im get through to you..muhahahah..xDDDD
Posted at 10:31am on April 27th, 2008
very cool.:)
Posted at 5:39pm on April 27th, 2008
THAT S GOOD POetry. i could never rite that. ^_^ -^_^-
Posted at 7:15pm on April 30th, 2008
one word AWESOME
Posted at 12:32pm on May 6th, 2008
yo the poems were wack i luv em all dude ;-}
Posted at 11:24am on July 10th, 2008
that is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!