song in progress tell me what you think
Posted on: September 2, 2008, at 09:32:51pm

ok the topic, is a girl finding out her b/f cheated on her, and she kills him, his family, and then herself, tell me what you think of it.. so far


im done with your shit
just pack up and go
you promised me never
just shut up and go

ill have my revenge
you can count on that
you hurt me so much
now get that fact

i hope you understand
what i had to do
it was the only way
i could get over you

Now i sit above your grave
with tears in my eyes
i scream out "thank you"
up towards the sky

now i sit alone
thinking of what ive done
tears fall from my face
as i reach for the gun
i ask myself why
you had to go and do that
had to go for that bitch
your family cheered you on
but now they are gone
they lay beside you
in the cold ground
im finnally over
ill see you around

1. 1: Eternal_Nightmare
   Posted at 10:41pm on September 2nd, 2008

   Dude that shizzle is raw! I Love it! Good Job Shade! ;] <3