freindship poem #2
Posted on: September 7, 2008, at 03:11:37pm

If I could catch a rainbow
I would do it just for you,
And share with you its beauty
On the days you're feeling blue
If I could build a mountain
You could call your very own,
A place to find serenity,
A place to be alone
If I could take your troubles
I would toss them in the sea,
But all these things I'm finding
Are impossible for me
I cannot build a mountain,
Or catch a rainbow fair,
But let me be what I know best,
A friend who's always there

1. 1: pina626
   Posted at 4:41pm on September 7th, 2008

   omg..thats so great!
   absolutely precious!
   u really write well jenjen..i enjoy reading ur poems!.^-^
2. 2: Harp of Altara
   Posted at 5:47pm on September 7th, 2008

   So cute! It also seems to have a very nice cadence when read aloud.
   You are missing some periods, though.
3. 3: Master Hakuoh9872
   Posted at 9:56am on September 12th, 2008

   So beautiful...I felt a strong warmth in my heart from reading this. It was simply superb!:)