Sonnet - Sunlight
Posted on: December 16, 2009, at 12:07:39am

In this modern world there is but a pause.

No time to stand and talk or sit and think.

Never wonder why or how, just because.

Write a letter with invisable ink.

With but one click it zooms through cyber space.

Everyone is moving faster now.

Take a left, dont stop, its all a haze.

The curtains rise, step foward, take a bow.

This life is an act. Its all a lie.

Material gain is all that matters.

In designer clothing is how we die.

No love, no life, now you lie in tatters.



If once you looked up, Id be alright.

For if you gazed above, youd see sunlight
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i wrote this for class, leave a comment :3 i like critisizem

1. 1: roxtar
   Posted at 7:25am on December 16th, 2009

   WOW!!! this is truely amazing!! i dont think that it needs any improvements what so ever :) Excelent job!
2. 2: FunnyBoy_Dylan
   Posted at 9:09am on December 16th, 2009

   wow sam ur are truely talented.....this is a beautiful poem....just like u :D...but you do not need to fix this poem...its perfect :D
3. 3: knuckles2224
   Posted at 9:19pm on February 9th, 2011

   Do a collaboration with me pleazse?
   I'd be honored.
4. 4: FlamingThumbsDown
   Posted at 8:58pm on February 10th, 2011

   Hey I think this was good actually. I like the flow of it. Has a interesting beginning all the way to an end. Nice job.
5. 5: RockerSam
   Posted at 12:16pm on February 12th, 2011

   lol thanks ^-^