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My Sucky quizilla story
Posted on: August 18, 2008, at 01:57:15pm

Screw the damn intros!1
Created by konnichiwaIhateyou

i don't wanna hear any bitchin about my story so shut your mouth and just read the damn thing!
Tagged: naruto, screwthedamnintros
Created by konnichiwaIhateyou on 05/14/2008
Take the Screw the damn intros!1 quiz.A surprise and a question (My pov) "Onii-chan, why is Neji following you around?" Naruto asked sitting down next to me. "He didnt tell you? We're now kareshi and kanojo, Naruto-kun." He hit the floor sideways shaking. "Onii-chan w-w-when did this happen," he said. About 3 months ago. "What I miss"Neji said walking in the room. I blushed and started stuttering "Nothing Neji- kun" "I missed you kanojo" he hugged me I couldnt help but think about the fact that my cat ears were displayed clearly on top of my head.
WTF?! whats with the ears?! {i'll explain it later. its a long ass story}I turned even redder and wiggled away from Nejis arms."Neji-kun, could you not do that in public?" I said looking around "Naruto is the only one that needs to know about us right now." "But Mamiko..." Neji whined. I made a fist at his face. "Are you questioning me neji". i asked glaring at him "N-n-no m-mamiko"
I looked at my watch. "Shit. We're gonna be late for class if we dont hurry. You coming, Naruto?" I turned to face him. "In a minute onii-chan. I have to do something first." He was staring at Hinata.
...naruto and hinata sittin in a tree.. k-i-s-s-i-n-g.......{naruto puts a hand over my mouth-nothin to see here move along} "Are you still waiting to get a date with her nii-chan? All you have to do is ask her out." I smirked. He turned redder than Sakuras dress. "Onii-chan, why do you think Im waiting for Hinata? She wouldnt even look at me." He said dropping his head. Naruto remember how whenever you needed support or encouragement hinata was always there? well my sources tell me she's got a monster crush on you as well.Kichi and Mayako helped me meet Neji-kun.I'm now closer to him than ever. Now lets go to class and drop this conversation." I said. Suddenly I saw Neji staring at some chick drooling. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING NEJI? YOU'RE MAKING A MESS ON THE FLOOR!!!!" I ran over to him my specially sharpened chopsticks in hand fangs bared. "AAAAAAAAUGH!!!!!!":
O.O (Narutos pov) Onii-chan started yelling at Neji-san because he was drooling over some girl who passed in front of him. As I walked down the hallway to class, Neji-san ran past me with Mamiko trailing behind him. "NEJI I'M GONNA KILL YOU FOR THIS!!!!!!" she yelled
*well you see there was this one incident involving me and him and a wake up call and well.......ask badluckvixen13 what i mean..* @whats goin on here/He probably drooled on her/ She gets pissed off at the slightest thing. You sure shes giving him just what he deserves?/ I dunno.* I looked at the clock. "Kuso. Im gonna be late."

  1. The way I see it, (props myself up like Bill Gates) this story is about a relationship between you and Neji along with commentary by Naruto. It ends in jealous heartbreak on your part. I like it, but there's no intro here. I give it a 7 out of 10 (lol)

  2. can you help me develop it more i would very much appreciate it